Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both the view and give you’re opinion.
Education is the most important step, that each boy/girl must have it. Educational success starts from home and continue with them at school. Some people believe that educational success, depend on the role of each teacher; others think that students’ behavior is important to gain this prosperity.
On one hand, students spend most of their day at school, that’s why some parents think that educational success depends on great tutors. First, a good teacher for most parents, is the one who knows how to motivate and encourage his/her class, on how to learn, act, talk with his/her friends inside and outside of the room. Second, some of the society think that an instructor must have a strategy, on how to deal with students, to increase their confidence even if they are facing any physical or mental disability. For example, one of my cousins, had a mental problem since he was born, lack of trust is the issue, on of his teachers know how to deal with and motivated him and his way of thinking changed. In my opinion, teachers play the main role to create the best character in each student, for a great future.
On the other hand, some believe that success began with students’ attitude and how th.
First, students should listen and respect to each remark his/her teacher says, in order to know how to communicate and participate in class to reach the success they need. Second, the behavior comes from the environment where he/she lives, how they act and talk at home, where this will reflect positively and negatively in class with their friends or instructors, even on their results. For example, lately in some schools in Lebanon, the administrators faced many problems with students and their parents, because of their behavior and disrespectful way of dealing in the class. From my side, I think that students’ attitude might ruin their study year and future, if they kept acting in an impolite conduct.
As a conclusion, there is two point of views for educational success, some people think that a good teacher lead to it, others believe that students conduct is important to reach this success. In my opinion, one hand can’t clap alone, both teachers and students can make the difference together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99204244032 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64377870045 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503978779841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.014891258 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.466666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250476843295 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10929309295 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115865510795 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210405454456 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111967461324 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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