Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Employees play a vital role in the growth of any organization. However, while some believe that age is a crucial factor, which decides the importance of any employee for the company, i would not agree with this notion and argue that the value of any worker, whether young or old, is equal, but distinctively.
To begin with elder workers, they are the great decision-makers. This is because they have life-long expertise in the same domain, which they tend to use on their daily operations at the workplace. For instance, If there would be any kind of trouble that occurred with the client, experienced workers know all the possible loop-holes and can smoothly come out from such a dire situation. Conversely, young employees probably would get stressed and worsen it.
However, i also believe that the significance of freshers can not be denied. The reason for this that modern youth is well-versed with the latest technologies. Unlike elder workers, young employees tend to rely on automation. Hence, generating a huge range of reports and operating numerous breakthrough technologies are a few specialties they own. For illustration, In the contemporary world, Artificial Intelligence has drastically reduced the manual work, which has undeniably developed by the modern youth, and they are constantly automating several manual tasks. Thus, millennials are the future of the workplace.
In conclusion, although age is indeed the crucial factor that impacts worker's performance, I feel that elder or young employees, both have their own expertise and knowledge, which equally contribute towards the prosperity of any association.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38521400778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04796202764 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6251040739 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168454906395 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592222815595 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568316388233 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102938843606 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372027489509 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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