With the advancement of technology, it seems artificially intelligence robots will replace jobs in workplace.Though I believe that some jobs will be replaced by robots but the need for human jobs wont be compensated that easy.This essay will discuss the need for critical jobs which required human intervention will always be present however, few jobs can be done by robots.
Robots will replace jobs in near future that required less or neglizable human interference. Easy jobs which don’t require much human contact will be substituted by robots as this will be cheaper, efficient.In one of restaurants in India, robots used to take orders. In addition, these robots can perform 24 hours, doesnot demand extra pay and provides maximum output in compare to humans.For these reasons, it is believed that most of the jobs which can provide maximum efficiency without human will be replaced by artificial intelligent robots.
Conversely, there would be ample number of jobs which cannot be achieved by automated robots.Human civilization have reached the pinnacle of advancement in all sections be it medicine, science,education, psychology. We can make robots advanced with all technology but it cannot achieved what human achieved till now.Jobs which required involvement of human mind like scientist, doctors, teachers and many more. From this it is evident that robots how much progress, human needs in most jobs cannot be replaced.
In conclusion, we can say that as mankind progresses further towards the development, robots may replace humans in most number of jobs.AI influenced robots may takeover some human jobs but cannot grasp over jobs which are critical and need specifically human intervention.Ultimately, few jobs that needs minimal human contact will replaced by automated robots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4982078853 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13895424438 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523297491039 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.104242542 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.75 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284765087599 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144081221492 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841964400219 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201858502795 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901987686731 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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