Internet blessed modern humans with all kind of luxury and easiness. Similar to other aspect, Internet's effect has been seen widely seen in our shopping habits. Increase in online buying may affect normal shops in areas drastically but I feel that the need of such shops will never end.
Buying things online is easier, cheaper. However, there are benefits and consequences for every facility. Though online shopping allures us with various offers and advantages, but time consumption is always a concerned factor. Moreover, online shopping did not reach to all the strata of our society and still some section of mass will heavily rely on shops in town and cities.
For example, if we need to buy daily groceries we need to be dependent on our local shops in cities and towns. Because shopping daily groceries atleast takes a day to reach our homes. One more concern regarding shopping live is that, one cannot test the products in human which we can always check multiple times during shopping offline. Exchange of faulty products online is full of mess where customer needs to complain and waits for refund or exchanged items. Such events are not possible if we shop offline.
In conclusion, I feel the need of shops in our towns and cities will never end though can get affected with the increase progress of technologies and internet usages. Nowadays, creation of more shopping malls with extravagant infrastructure and facilities for consumers shows that the need for shopping offline will never be degrade to the level of shut down. The demand for local shops was always there and will be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on our local shops in cities and towns. Because shopping daily groceries atleast takes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98513011152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44380181842 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3423520441 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317121286349 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112519233438 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666592016858 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20718853568 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202247092179 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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