Being happy in life is the key to success. Many people believes that having a huge amount of money can make a person’s life filled with happiness. But is it really true that money can but everything? We will discuss why money is important in everyone's life and what else is required to make someone feel happy.
Firstly, most of the people spend their entire life to become successful and earn a lump sum amount to buy the things or assets of their need. Once they are able to do so, an individual feels the joy of owning something which they can cherish with other family members or friends. Sometime it make a person feel proud. For instance, a man or woman saves money from their regular income, for a long time, to buy a house or a property for living. Whenever they are able to reach the final goal, that moment gives them feeling of being secured under a roof permanently.
Moreover, holding a lot money increase a person status for being recognized in the society among many others. A person is always get a special treatment and respect by the people, with whom they are surrounding with in every step, if the financial status is known to others. Similar scenarios can be seen with the celebrities and well-known businessman.
However, there are many other things which is not expensive or materialistic, but have the quality of keep a person's life energized. Family is such a thing. For example, people sometimes become so busy with the passion of making currency, they convert themselves into a money-making machine. As a result they forgot to spend quality time with family; and miss out all the day-to-day happiness.
In conclusion, money is an obvious thing that is required to buy and own the things from your wish list. But someone should not leave all the small happiness coming from every side while running behind money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8080495356 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5243496872 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5638799851 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319697075573 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098130416294 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786282678846 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17969993861 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11648641553 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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