Some people believe that everyone should be free to make their own lifestyle choices, even if those choices are unhealthy. Other people think that the government should intervene to influence people’s choices, for example by putting high taxes on unhealthy products.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
There is no deny that privilege to make individual decision is right of anybody even though they could have negative implications. Few folks in the masses argue that people in authority can influence the poor lifestyle choices by taking certain measures. In this essay we will look into both side of the argument and put forward my views why government should not interfere with people's choices.
To begin with, imposing higher taxes on product such as sugar-rich contents such as soda, fat-rich items as fast food will impact economy negatively. Low-income family groups will not be able to afford any of such items and the bracket of society which could buy will be buderned with extra amount. As a result, people would turn to other unhealthy products such as artificial juices which are still as sugary and can cause obesity with concomitant high-blood pressure, diabetes. Policymakers can rather focus on coming up with unique ideas to make people aware about side-effects of suffering due to their decisions.
On the other hand, personal responsibility lies with area of any individual. No one alone, should be held when a human being make bad choices. On the contrary, if these decisions did done for people then we would not be living a democratic and free society. For instance, in North Korea the regime have too much power and takes major decision for all the citizens of the country and they have no freedom to make decisions. Privacy is no longer a option. This is wrong cause basic freedom is right of any person. Hence, I believe government should not interfere with people's life.
In conclusion, although there are many side-effects of an individual's decisions, government should not impose their opinions on general public. In my opinion, it can be tackle by making people more aware and educated by campaigns of benefits of healthy choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, still, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02572347267 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63154158516 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8120795943 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305072193736 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950953537435 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739847120488 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187469249484 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525329103137 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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