Some people believe that everyone should be free to make their own lifestyle choices, even if those choices are unhealthy. Other people think that the government should intervene to influence people’s choices, for example by putting high taxes on unhealthy products.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion
There is no deny that any individual have freedom to make their own decisions. Some people argue that government should come in between and change people's lifestyle choices. In this essay we will look at both the side of argument and I will put my points why former is right.
To begin with governing authorities intervening in common folks life is not right. This is because personal freedom is paramount right of anyone. On the contrary, if government does influence people's decision by imposing higher taxes on products such as liquor, fast food and sugar rich content. As a result, there would be detrimental effect on business and would in turn slow the economy. Instead, government should run campaigns and increase public awareness by sharing knowledge on negative effects of poor life choices.
Each and every individual is responsible for certain amount of their well being. On the contrary, if someone does make those choices for any person then we would living in an authoritrian era. Responsibility of poor decisions should not rely in realms of government duties.Therefore, I believe it would be best in everyone's interest to leave personal privacy untouched and uninfluenced.
In conclusion, personal decision should be free irrespective of any influence. Instead, government should focus more on making people aware about bad consequences of poor choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...se choices for any person then we would living in an authoritrian era. Responsibility ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...not rely in realms of government duties.Therefore, I believe it would be best in everyone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92289339271 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640909090909 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2348312197 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351659158542 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110697362614 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102625721327 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210207213591 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571993502154 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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