Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Which point of view do you agree with?
From very far decades until today people are exploring their surrounded environment and seeking to enhance their quality of life by various ways. However, some people argue that outer space exploration might be the best method to enhance their lives. While others believe that such exploring might deplete their nations budget for very poor result. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly think that discovering the outer space has a plethora of benefits for the whole humanity, this essay will examine the reason for my opinion in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that investing in the space is a very expensive as well as it has a very bad impact on the environment if something wrong has happened accidentally. For example, 20 years ago, Russia tested the performance of a rocket, this kind of experiments are usually too expensive. however, the result was unpleasant at all, as an environmental disaster has occur. More than 20 scientists and 45 citizens have been killed because of such detrimental radiation.
On the contrary, it’s irrefutable that outer space investment is extremely significant for our life. For instance, GPS, cellphone and many other sophisticated technologies are the results of such great discoveries. Furthermore, the space has some rare raw material which’s pivotal for enhancing the life on the earth. For example, the iron is one of the unique items that’s not existed on our planets and used to construct various buildings. Over and above that, exploring the space might enhance the international collaboration between nation as well as it might alleviate the high cost of it. Finally, many advanced countries might utilize the space improve their security status. The USA as an example uses their surveillance satellite in the space to find terrorists anywhere and to protect their national security from any unexpected attack.
To sum up, I think exploring the space is extremely important regardless of the cost as it evolves the quality of the all individuals lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, no doubt, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21492537313 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90169214964 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0283097672 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228730407735 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745551705223 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696488267091 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133727784796 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076169877569 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.