It is imperative that the government spend the available fund for the most effective public services of the nation which is beneficial to society at large. The government generates this money through the taxation system and hence should be utilized for most significant aspects for the public.
From my point of view, countries should employ most of their funds in critical public services such as education, health, and transport systems rather spending money on entertainment activities as this sector is less beneficial to the public than that of the important the three areas mentioned above.
The most important sector of the economy is the education as the development of society in this sector is one of the crucial requirement for sustainable growth of a country in the long run. Governments all over the world have the responsibility to ensure that every citizen of the country is educated, at least to read and write. The investment in this sector will be in the form of establishing more schools, universities and vocational training centers for the school drop-outs and also providing scholarships for continuing higher education.
The next essential sector of the economy is the health. It is vital that everyone in the society has the means to get the critical health benefits. Governments can invest in the health sector in many ways. The medical practitioners should be taken care by providing them with the sufficient remuneration and benefits so that the critical skill migration in the medical field of the country be avoided. Also, the authorities can educate the general public and implement many vaccination programs across the states to eradicate many diseases such as polio, chicken pox, and malaria.
Moreover, last but not the least significant sector of the country is the public transportation system. States’ funds should deploy in putting up proper transport network systems such as the building of metro-train facility around the city. More lanes on the highway roads can be built to facilitate the car-pooling for the commuters. This facility will reduce the carbon fuel emission and helps to reduce the global warming.
In conclusion, governments should spend a significant portion of their funds on highly demanding public-service sectors such as health, education and public transportation rather than pay huge money on art.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
.... Also, the authorities can educate the general public and implement many vaccination programs...
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Line 6, column 188, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...lic transportation rather than spending a huge money on art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, at least, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2671957672 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92005136606 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8815928731 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173209411917 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583497975396 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767100022624 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120735462873 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944880605085 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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