Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Now, people have become more adventurous compared to the past. Thus, they feel hobbies can be enjoyable only when iy is extremely exciting like sky diving or para gliding, mountain or wall climbing and so on. I think it does not matter which activity has opted in leisure time as everyone has their own choice. This essay will discuss the reasons behind pursuing past time in terms of choice and interest rather than with level of difficulty.
To begin with, I think people choose hobbies to refresh and reenergize themselves. Younger generation prefer to have those extreme sports and hobbies. While in India today in the newspaper, it says that 85 percent of people enjoy activities or hobbies which provide them satisfaction. Simple activities like listening to music, playing games, etc. can give much happiness which is not a difficult activities. Moreover, easy activities are easier to learn. Hence, these do not provide only way of passing free time but also enhance skills in an individual.
On the other hand, difficult activities are very risky. Although, it develop confidence and braveness in human being but it directly put life of person in danger. Even in worst situation, it may lead to health disastrous. For instance, nervous breakdown, heart attack and so on. Besides this, if a person want to pursue such activity then he/she has to take proper training and equipment along with themselves which sometimes upset the budget of a person.
In conclusion, I think hobbies are depends on everyone's choice. Choosing activity is a prerogative of individual and it is according to a person's lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...xciting like sky diving or para gliding, mountain or wall climbing and so on. I t...
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...will discuss the reasons behind pursuing past time in terms of choice and interes...
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
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Suggestion: activity
...much happiness which is not a difficult activities. Moreover, easy activities are easier t...
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...activities are very risky. Although, it develop confidence and braveness in human being...
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...ctly put life of person in danger. Even in worst situation, it may lead to health disast...
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...es which sometimes upset the budget of a person. In conclusion, I think hobbie...
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... activity is a prerogative of individual and it is according to a persons lifesty...
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
...of individual and it is according to a persons lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08239700375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67994736111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677902621723 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4303834664 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3888888889 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129988487823 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349213119787 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401442027393 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704849782401 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287744935383 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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