Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world and in modern lifestyle having a healthy diet is one of the most important subjects and on another side it is too hard for people who live in megacities. Now there are two major arguments about members of public’s diet, some experts say having a good diet is people’s responsibility, however, others believe that governments must help people to have a healthy diet. To reach a final verdict I will explain both of these views and in the end, I will discuss my own opinion.
For having a good life and enjoy that, people must try to have a healthy diet. In many modern families’ parents work out of the home and they arrive home in late night and children are at schools until afternoon too. So, parents cannot control their children food Though schools try to provide a healthy diet for their students but in many cases, students eat some fast food or sugary and fattening snacks, in this condition parents must explain to their children that having a healthy diet is the most important thing in their lives. Also, parents must cook healthy and good decorated food for their kids since experts say that children attend to the food’s appearances. As I mentioned cooking food at home can improve adults’ diet who work out of home too. Because of modern lifestyle, some workers don’t care about the food that they eat and it can be dangerous for their health.
The governments must try to make a good life for their people and food is a primary need that has an important effect on members of the public’s life. First, Governments must have a serious supervision of food provider companies and some rules must be legislated by governments for those companies to provide their products by healthy materials and in hygiene conditions and places. Second, a rule should be passed by governments about employers for having specific lunch time for their workers because it is important that people eat their meals in a peaceful condition. Finally, People should be encouraged by the TV advertisements or on street billboards to have a healthy diet which are provided by the governments.
In conclusion, I think having a healthy diet for modern people living in big cities must be supported by governments and attended by individuals, for instance, if workers cannot eat their healthy home-cooked food in their workplace or cannot eat in a good condition basically it is not important that what they eat. In the end, I believe that having a healthy diet is the governments’ and individuals’ responsibility and we cannot separate these from each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cannot separate these from each other. People should be encouraged by the TV ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93342641772 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423913043478 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7137529882 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34501634289 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134109364898 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668329880754 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220403148545 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484914266869 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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