With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely.
To what extent do you agree?
Many people around the world are working in the industry of fast food and their life is depending on their job. in my country, there is a popular chain fast food restaurant named “Super Star”. According to their website, 500 persons are working for them as the chef, labor, delivery and etc. If fast food will ban these people would unemployment and it can lead to a massive problem for society and government. On the other hand, fast food companies can promote and then employee many people than now and it helps our societies.
Having a healthy life is not just depending on our diet, the gentle exercise is an important roller too. All people accept that eating fast food regularly may lead to health issues. While having a healthy diet without a gentle exercise cannot guarantee a healthy life. But if people eat fast food then they do exercise at fixed times they may have a healthy life.
All people can watch out their diet and no one needs any force to have a healthy diet. Not only, the bad effects of fast food and processed food are known for all people. Also, all people are free to choose their lifestyle and there is not any obligation to eat fast food anymore. So, individuals must control their diet and their lifestyle by themselves.
To make the long story short, the banding of the fast food industry is not the best way to control society’s health. the answer to this issue is teaching to members of the public to control their diet and their lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63773584906 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37374388285 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.8434796759 49.4020404114 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23272396568 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919222794318 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853880536452 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136711068353 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540989803416 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.