These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Many people find out immigrate to a foreign country as a solution for their current issues in their life. Although people immigrating to a new country will face on some problems, they will get many benefits. I will discuss two sides of this coin and in the end, I will write my points of view.
Immigration can enable people to commence a new life. First, moving to a new country can enhance people’s life quality. Usually, people move from their homeland to a developed country and this is the main reason why people immigrate. So, immigration to a rich country generally can lead to a better living. Second, leaving the home country can be an adventurous event in people’s life that leads to enable people to experience a new side of life that can improve people’s personalities. Finally, the majority of immigrated people think that immigration can guarantee their children’s life because of the high-quality education system and medical system that exists in rich countries.
Home sick and culture shock are two huge problems of immigration. Homesick is the first problem that all people will face on when they immigrate. For instance, based on the research that has been done by Cambridge University, researchers have found out that all immigrated people will suffer home sick for two months in average when they leave their country and it can lead to very serious psychological problems such as depression and etc. Culture shock is very common in Asian who immigrate to western countries. For instance, when an Iranian people immigrate to Australia, they need to adapt themselves with their host country’s culture. But, it can be very difficult for them. Specially, relationships can be very complicated for them in first days and it can disable them for making a new friend or contacting to foreign people.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of immigrating are more beneficial than disadvantages. But, Homesick is a very important issue that I cannot miss it and I think immigrated people must get a help from a psychologist.
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06158357771 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99975776091 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495601173021 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1974390249 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229947563453 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861330138274 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423671104538 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142818738708 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361960046242 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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