In today world and in modern lifestyle have a healthy diet is one of the most important subjects and on another side is too hard for people living in megacities. Now there are two major arguments about members of public’s diet, some experts say having a good diet is people’s responsibility, however, others believe that governments must help people to have a healthy diet. To reach a final verdict I will explain both of these views and in the end, I will write my own opinion.
For having a good life and enjoy that, people must try to have a healthy diet. In many today's family parents work out of home and they arrive home at evening of night and children are at schools until afternoon, so parents cannot control their children food Though schools try to provide a healthy diet for their students but in many times students eat some fast food or sugar-full and fattening snacks, in this condition parents must explain to their children that have a healthy diet is the most important thing in their life also parents must cook healthy and good looking food for their kids and because children eat their food initially by their eyes. As I mentioned cooking food at home can improve adults who work out of home’s diets too because of modern life-style some workers don’t care about the food that they eat and it can be dangerous for their health.
The governments must try to make a good life for their people, which food is a primary need that has an important effect on members of the public’s life. First, Governments must have a serious supervision of food provider companies and legislate some rules for those companies to provide their products in health and hygiene conditions and places. Second, Governments must pass rules about employers for having specific launch time for their labors because it is important that people eat their meals in a peaceful condition. Finally, Governments must encourage people to have a healthy diet by TV’s advertisement of street billboards and etc.
In conclusion, I think have a healthy diet for modern people living in big cities must support by governments and attend by individuals, for instance if workers cannot eat their healthy home-cooked food in their workplace or cannot eat in a good condition basically it is not important that what they eat so in this situation governments must play their important role and legislate rules for launch time for labors. So, in the end, I believe that have a healthy diet is governments and individuals’ responsibility and we cannot separate these from each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ust try to have a healthy diet. In many todays family parents work out of home and the...
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Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...os;s advertisement of street billboards and etc. In conclusion, I think have a healthy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91343963554 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73723167705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444191343964 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.576189563 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5833333333 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33095907154 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152321015662 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616224589649 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235017806097 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401703270891 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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