Some people believe that leadership skills are born while others are of opinion that leadership can be acquired. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often debated that leadership skills in an indvidual come to them by birth but other section of people argue that those skills only can be gained. Let's look into both the perspectives and form an opinion.
Firstly, headship is a most important qualitiy in human beings which not only dictates our authority but also keeps track of disciplined work.(give space) In some communities, it is often belived that these qualities come (inherited) by birth and they look up to them for all the major decisions. (give space) For example, in few Asian countries leader's children are next in line to take the
command of the throne rather than some random person who might be more qualified, because it is blindly belived that chiefs’ heirs has all the require ed qualities through birth.
Secondly, today as you see many people who are elected reprsentatives to the country's house of senate come from a poor background and they are in-charge to lead and guide the society and guide them. (give space) It is belived that they experience many hardships in life and try to build their social skills and problem-solving techniques which helps them accquire all the qualites they need to lead a group or community. Notably, A.P.J Abdul Kalam who came from a very poor background where his father was a fisherman but his determination towards serving the nation and then eventually becoming most sucessful president of India who inspired millions of people around the globe.
In my opinion leadership is nothing but guiding others to prosper but not commanding them. Which only comes with skills and knowledge we experience in real life.
To conclude, there is always a difference of opinion in a section of people that leadership skills are often obtained from their parents while others argue it is only gained with real-life events. Where both of opinions might be true but we dont have a conclusive proof.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95015576324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60405578854 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4756360753 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.454545455 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246153860682 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104640956119 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825809188495 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143363910166 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10459471624 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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