Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?
The eternal question about how humans could obtain happiness in their lives has not been answered yet.while some people think that money is a major contributor to happiness,I believe that happiness has other deep meanings which may not achieved by money.
it is undeniable that collecting money is the ultimate goal of our life.students struggle to earn their degrees so that they can hired in a prestigious job with handsome salary,businessmen dedicate their time and effort to make fortunes and profits which illustrates the importance of money in making people happy.money can buy spacious houses,luxurious cars and healthy food that results in more pleasure and content for rich people.moreover, wealthy people work less time so they have enough time to spend it in the sporting and recreational centers that improves their mental and physical heath enormously and the life style of celebrities is an obvious example for this.Therefore,money plays a vital role in creating happiness.
Nonetheless, the concept that all wealthy people are happy confirmed to be erroneous because our world has many clear examples which refute this concept.Scandivain citizens for instance are getting the highest annual salaries, however they suffer from the high rates of suicide and psychological disorders which proves that money is not the complete happiness.additionally,many researches acknowledge that some happiness hormones like dopamine and serotonin reach its zenith when people involved in a charitable activity or accomplish a long-waiting dream.thus, happiness has other mysterious sides which can not be bought by money.
In conclusio,although money is largely aides in achieving happiness, i believe that there are other sources oo pleasure and happiness.these sources differs from one person to anthor according to their needs,mindsets and aspirations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66308243728 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57217327206 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.162524968 49.4020404114 450% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 395.0 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.75 20.7667163134 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332252496092 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204827134488 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592434473403 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204827134488 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592434473403 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.1 13.0946893788 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.38 8.58950901804 144% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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