Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue wprking after the age of 65. However, others say there should be not a limitation on age anyone should be allowed to work regardless of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nobody would dispute the fact that for livelihood individuals need to work. Some assert that people after attaining the age of 65 should be prohibited to work. However, others argue that there should be no such restriction as people could work irrespective of the age. I am personally in the favour of former view.
To begin with, the fundamental benefit could be derived by restricting the elderly to work is an exponential rise in employment opportunities for younger generation. To vindicate, in this contemporary era, the older segment in some countries is allowed to work even after retirement resultantly pose a threat to the bread and butter of young ones; therefore nations are confronting the potential problem of unemployment of youth. Hence, this phenomenon can hamper the growth of a nation.
Nevertheless, in the support of other view point it can be said that working continuously after older age boost the personality as well as health of a person. To corroborate, qualities sillies engaging oneself and work helps to be more healthy and active in life. Not only it stimulates the physical health but also it brings financial Independence for old ones who are sometimes of burden by the children. Doing so will help them survive well in life.
In conclusion, countries are facing the detrimental issue of unemployment to a great extent which can be solved by offering jobs to those who are more in need of it. Therefore, my contention credibly justifies the reason of not allowing individuals to undertake jobs after attaining age of 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98120476923 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5968705743 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347803259445 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11574847604 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132482365132 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199765966073 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121468791389 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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