Some people believe that old public buildings in cities should be restored while others say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people would argue that old structures in cities should be replaced with new modern structure, while others argue that they should be repaired. This essay will argue that despite the fact that the cost of refurbishing is very high, I believe they have cultural and historical significance.
On the one hand, the cost of repairing of museums and palaces are very high. A lot of funds is required in restoration because the buildings are embodied and decorated with stones and gems and getting it to its original state is a time-consuming process. For example, the United Kingdom government has spent a whopping 110 million USD in repairing the 177 years old Big Ben clock in London. However, I believe demolishing of any old buildings would lead to a monumental loss.
On the other hand, historical buildings are part of a country’s heritage. The tower structures have an important function in history, and some are even the nation’s pride. Architects studies to understand how such complex structures were made without any use of modern equipment’s by the masons and still standout to be architectural marvels. For instance, one of the sections of Uday Palace in Udaipur is being currently used by the government as a resort for foreign tourist, while remaining sections of the palace are dedicated as a museum showcasing the artifacts and clothes of the rulers. I believe demolition of it would make the upcoming generation clueless about the past.
In conclusion, although the major drawback is the expenditure to be incurred on the restoration of the old buildings. In my opinion, it is important to keep them intact and maintain it for future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (Ben) must be used with a third-person verb: 'clocks'.
Suggestion: clocks
... in repairing the 177 years old Big Ben clock in London. However, I believe demolishi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dings would lead to a monumental loss. On the other hand, historical buildings ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07220216606 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94343179708 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4716462934 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298450524828 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854208752877 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106210825289 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164718114818 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939204835086 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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