Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is an irrefutable fact that, digital media has taken giant place in education system nowadays. Some people deem that, online plateform for learning purpose is necessity, while others have argue with digitalization and they think that, printed books and other material could help better. However, i deem that online and internet medium should be used for learning purpose.
To begin with, online materials have more visuality than printed one and parallelly online medium is more lucrative for children. Additionally, children's nature always attracted with digital gadgets rather than printed books. Sometime they think books are boaring for them. Economic factor plays crucial role because financial burden can be mitigated by using technology for learning purpose. For example, if any childlearn reading and writing from online education, than less printed materials and professional teachers required. In consequences education fess will be reduced automatically. It saves tree if printing reduced in education system.
On the contrary side, some people opine that, printing materials are more pivotal than online because it is conventional method of learning. Entire education system can not work without paper and pen practice for child. Moreover, eyesight is also affected by light emmited from screen if child spend long time with online medium, whereas no detrimental effect of printing materials. Child can focus more while paper base books and able to comprehend meaning of text well.
In recapitulation, both printed paper base material and online media play essential role in education system in modern era. But, I deem that, online media is fastest way for children as their grasping power is more with visuality compare to printed materials.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: argued
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Suggestion: to purpose
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Suggestion: to purpose
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52222222222 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63136353894 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8663073079 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272680744995 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896144867958 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684400302667 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169702616816 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489994653668 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.