All people have the right to education. However, not everyone may come from a wealthy background and hence, many decide to drop off from college as they are unable to bear the expenses. Although, it is the duty of the government to ensure that all their citizens are educated, some believe the only solution it is provide free university education to all. In my opinion, I completely adhere that irrespective of their financial status, all should receive equal treatment and similar education as this will encourage people to study in their home country rather than go abroad.
To begin with, those who study free or receive aid from the government are ridiculed by their classmates and termed as "freeloaders". Free education will create a common level, thereby reducing the disparity in the classroom. In addition, all children until the age of 21 will receive formal education and the drop out rate would be drastically reduced. According to a recently recorded survey, an alarming 78% of school drop outs felt that if universities offered free learning, it would reduce the financial burden on their parents and they could complete their education. Government should invest more in the education sector as they are the foundation and future of the economy.
Furthermore, it is the norm for students to go abroad as they are of the notion that if they pay more they will receive better education. In such scenarios, if they receive, international standard education in their home country many will prefer to study and work here, consequently, contributing to an increase in the economic health of the country. This will prevent drainage of human resources and prevent national talent.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that free education is not only beneficial to the individual but also to the government as they can maintain a balance in society. Once, passed out from college everyone is free to pursue their individual dreams, albeit they all have a common education background
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11854103343 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92914512593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525835866261 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1378177604 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184658825677 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763106151409 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762191848848 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117609961741 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733221397752 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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