Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's digital age and the easy availability of internet services, everything is possible at the tip of our fingers. From buying the groceries to the renting of the cars; connecting to our loved ones through video calling or developing our knowledge regarding the worldly affairs by reading stuff online. A person can receive all the information needed, by sitting in the comfort of home. In such a scenario, some people are of view that, the public libraries are not necessary, however, few others oppose this fact and feel that libraries should continue.
The individual's that considers library as a waste of time, are of opinion that, in this busy lifestyle, the people hardly have time to visit such places. Most of the required data or books are readily available online and the locals could access it anytime and from anywhere. Further, with the growing digitalization in the field of education, the requirement for hard copies is reducing drastically. Most of the younger generations prefer reading books on the Computers or the I-pads as they are easy to handle.
On the other hand, there are some folks especially the older generation, who still enjoy reading through paper books over the digitalized copies. These people are of view, that visiting a library, selecting and reading books has its own importance. Furthermore, libraries are not only limited to the books, many events and informative seminars are also conducted there. It is a good opportunity for the people to meet and socialize with each other.
In my opinion, I feel the public libraries are an important part of our society and should not be eradicated. Additionally, to cater the needs of various age groups, more digital equipments like the Computers, the Printers and the I - pad should be introduced in the libraries, thus having a modernized touch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, i feel, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06907894737 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637603834 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8155489542 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194540111031 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614129915624 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746627307316 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107660978154 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027239571117 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.