Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every person is unique, they have their own interests and likings. What one person may like, the other may dislike. Similarly is the case with sports, few individuals enjoys watching sports in their free time, but the others disregard it and consider it as a useless activity.
In my opinion, there are various factors that influences this thought of considering sports viewing as a waste of time. Firstly, it depends on a person’s perspective, there could be various reasons for such an attitude, for instance; having limited knowledge of sports, lack of time, being a workaholic etc. Secondly, lack of exposure to indoor or outdoor activities in the childhood. Majority of these hobbies are developed at a young age, if a person has not encountered any such situations or familiarise themselves with any kind of sport they would consider it boring and not fruitful.
Additionally, not everyone gets an opportunity to be a sportsperson, it requires dedication, commitment, determinations, game -strategies and long hours of work. By viewing these games live or on the Television, one gets an opportunity to passively learn by observing. Further, these games also portrays the qualities that a person should indulge in their life, like being a team player, having patience, controlling emotions, learning from defeat etc.
To conclude, though watching a game could not be as productive as other activities, but it has its own merits that cannot be overlooked. For a country like India sports viewing, especially a game like cricket is not only a hobby, but a passion that majority of the Indians enjoy and look forward for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13108614232 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97949902968 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7635380798 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910552828227 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346109502495 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434500401248 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567504840651 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410281526499 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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