Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s
development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
The discussion between the defenders of learning at home and those in favor of the traditional school system is far from settled yet. In my opinion, the school system is a better experience for children, in addition to helping them with academic knowledge is also useful in the development of social skills by interacting with others.
There are several advantages of home teaching. Firstly they can spend more time with family and siblings. Teaching children at home provides a specific learning environment. Designed to advance at the child's pace with no other direction but their own. Schooling at home also protects the child from bullies and others who might be a bad influence.
On the other hand, the traditional school system is provided with better technical resources and facilities like a library, a laboratory to help become the learning experience a more engaging one. The fact that schools have professionals teachers will also guarantee the best tuition across a vast range of disciplines. Finally, learning at the school will help children to socialize with their peers and how to deal with different scenarios like bullying, harassment, which they won't find at homeschooling.
I believe our youngsters must attend to the school system. That environment will help them not only academically but in general life. Despite spending more time at home with their beloved ones is helpful, it has some cons. That could also repress the child from living a more real-life experience with good and bad things along the way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
... laboratory to help become the learning experience a more engaging one. The fact that scho...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h they wont find at homeschooling. I believe our youngsters must attend to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75162788182 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9946475783 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233431632878 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850041860086 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558614185294 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150582716712 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605264849543 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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