Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Many people are convinced that young children in their teens should spend some of their time for charity work. Such activities will help not only the kids but also the society as a whole. In my opinion any work done to help the needy is a very beneficial to one's growth in life and also gives peace of mind.
To embark on doing unpaid charity work during you free time gives a feeling of happiness. The art of helping a needy is very satisfying and gives a sense of fulfillment. For example last week I went to this Old age home and cooked lunch with the people there. After the lunch we had a short story telling round, I felt like I had gone to the old days when my grandmother was alive. I was so small kid when my grandmother was terminally and did not get enough time to spend with her. But spending time with the people at old age home makes me reminisce the old days. So all in all it not only the people whom we are helping feel happy, we also get a sense of happiness.
One more thing is community work shows us the trouble people are facing. We are so busy with our problems that we overlook the problems of others. We can never help people if we do not understand their problem. In japan young kids of school are made to clean the toilets of school. A young kid at such age learns the importance of cleanliness by doing community work. Hence, despite people thinking otherwise community work helps a child to grow a sense of care.
In conclusion I totally agree with the common belief. I think like in some countries army work is compulsory after school, community work should have a compulsory curriculum at school. It is the need of the hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33653846154 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31859736429 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3288868805 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.2105263158 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214938855941 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668555237332 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706292608791 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130892893419 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320551340617 0.056905535591 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.