People in general are convinced that with the advanced technologies available, people will forget about the conventional form of reading newspaper or magazine. In my opinion the technological advancement makes news much more easily available than the age old method of getting information from the newspaper. Not only is it easier to get the news using the internet but also it is easier to store the information.
Firstly there is no need to wait for the newspaper in the morning, using the phone or laptop we can easily check the news whenever we want it. Using the internet we can get all the data within a click. It is so because in case of the paper we have to wait for the vendor to come and deliver it to us. For example if we have some other schedule and have to leave the house before the seller comes we will not be able to get the news on time. In such case we need to wait for some other way to get the newspaper at our work or on our way. Hence the time wastage is a really important factor and will eventually effect peoples decision on how to gather information.
Secondly using the e-books it is quite easier to store the data. When we read something interesting we want to keep it for us to read it later on in life. Using the new technology available it is much easier to store it and get it whenever we wish for it. When I was a child if I had read a poem which made a significant contribution in my life, I would love to read it later on in my adult life to remember the gravity of it. Using the modern method it makes it easier for me to store it and retrieve it whenever i wish for it.
In conclusion I agree with the general mass that a time will come when we will stop using the newspaper and magazine for information and will use the technology for any information. This changeover will take time but will eventually lead to it.
- Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. 61
- Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...he newspaper at our work or on our way. Hence the time wastage is a really important ...
Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
...ly important factor and will eventually effect peoples decision on how to gather infor...
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
...me to store it and retrieve it whenever i wish for it. In conclusion I agree w...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2776203966 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49137217083 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450424929178 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3960538526 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12634404662 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478333799536 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525521678029 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946962746879 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532517840586 0.056905535591 94% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.