Some people believe that there is a general rise in antisocial behavior and disrespect for others today. What could have caused this situation and how to improve it?
It is believed by many that, in today’s society, there has been an increase in antisocial behaviour and disrespect for fellow citizens. There are two main causes of this negative development, and two counter-measures can be identified to remedify this problem, which will be discussed now.
The main reason to antisocial behavior is stress. People today are burderned with work pressure; thus, hectic workload may cause people to adapt to antisocial behavior such as drinking, smoking, and substance abuse. They may do this in order to relieve stress, relax, and rejuvenate themselves.
Another cause can be attributed to the wide availability of alcohol. People can easily purchase them at any restaurants and supermarkets. Besides, convenience store, such as Family Mart and 7-11, sell them 24 hours a day, which may also increase crime rate due to people being under the influence of alcohol, especially during night time. Imbibing alcohol may lead to aggressive behaviour, particularly, in teenagers and young adults who are unable to handle themselves after getting drunk.
Turning to the possible remedies, the first way is to eliminate the source of stress. Employers must ensure that they do not give too much work to their employees. Indeed, it is important to have challenging goals, but they should be realistic so employees can have a better work-life balance. Therefore, enabling them to be less stressed and more content with their work and personal life. If they do have a reason which is making them suffer, they are more likely to stick to healthier way of living life. Another viable solution is the government enacting regulations on the sale of alcohol. They can do so by limiting the time for its sale. In addition, authority can impose heavy taxes on alcohol and cigrattes. Hence, many might be dissuaded from purchasing them if they are expensive.
In conclusion, antisocial behavior and disrespectful attitude be connected to work-related stress and alcohol consumption. Effective measure like employers contribution to reduce work and government’s legislation on timings to sell alcohol and cigrattes might help to address the problem to some extent.
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Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
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Suggestion: employers'; employer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31123919308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92979134067 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7659685144 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156901424251 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480347703326 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558484464126 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104214081048 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639841169243 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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