Some people believe that there is a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think this trend as positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that there is a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think this trend as positive or negative development?

One of the major break-through of science and technology was invention of aero-planes. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances this is a valuable tool. However, if used excessively, It become dangerous weapon and detrimental to both environment and society.

Technology has changed every aspect of our life and travel is no exception. We can cover miles of area in nick of time, which used to take month in ancient times through horses, mules and camels. Firstly, this advancement along with recent reduction of fares has boost tourism industry, on which economy of several countries depends. Increase of economic condition has changed the living standard of people tremendously. Secondly, executives could travel anywhere in the world in the nick of the time to form business deals and exporting and importing products and services flourishes international business. The world has become global village. You can get quality product from any other region at competitive price.

On the other hand, population is increasing drastically from last century and industrialization has resulted in deforestation and increased use of fossil fuels. these has threatened our environment by killing marine creatures and extinction of various animals. World is steadily leading to global warming. Air flights use excessive amount of fuel and cause of noise and air pollution and oil spills. Reduction of air travel can prove to be a marvelous step towards saving the planet and its inhabitants. However, as this means of travel is extremely expensive and only rich people could afford it, reduction would have minimal effect on the environment.

In conclusion, air travel is a luxury for affluent community as well as essential for the economy. I believe we should use it considerably to boost economic condition, but on the other hand reduce air travel within countries and try to use other means where it is possible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...tion and increased use of fossil fuels. these has threatened our environment by killi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97545744438 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9926220402 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167724959153 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438166827635 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432595669973 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920454586352 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434793968445 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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