Nowadays, with the advance of the technology some folks believe that travel by air will be less preferable in the future. However, I personally believe that it has negative but as well as positive growth for the society. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, lets analyse some important facts why it is negative development. Firstly, it can effect economy of a nation so if carefully examine that than realized that some mobs spent huge amount of money for traveling on monumental places. An other fact related to this is it contribute more 30 percent of total economy which was accounted in 2018. Secondly, Some countries there are deserts which makes harder for a person to travel on other sources like camel etc. because it took time to complete one round of whole.So, they something better to travel out from those place.
On the other hand, air planes consume a large amount of natural resources which are non removable source of energy so that is why it the problem of deforestation is risen up which causes serious problems in our environment.it also increase the problem of noise and emitting gasses in air which rise the problem of green house effect.secondly, it only main mean of transport only for the rich people and usally hard for ordinary people to afford.
To sum up, I would like to say that air travel is major contributor our economy. its hard us to face the reduction but if we take some measurable steps this problem might be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61076076087 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.877042874 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226592666368 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830633468313 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559272589502 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13806367888 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589169863373 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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