Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that dedicating some parts of income to tax is unfair and people must eligible to keep all their earning for themselves. In point of my view tax is a part of every citizen's cost and should not be ignored by individuals.
Nowadays making a standard life has become really strong and people works hardly to earn more money. It is supposed that how much they gain should not be divided and must be used to improve their personal life. Furthermore, providing life facilities is one of the government's responsibilities and the related expenses need to be provided by the national sources that every country has. For instance, some nations access to sea and they are able to produce numerous valuable trades via this source therefor people of these countries should be paid off tax.
On the other hand, tax is according to how much working people gain. If there is no rules to deduct some part of salary, a great gap will be produced between different levels of citizens. For example, in some advanced countries, the percentage of tax is connected to income's amount and who have higher salary should pay more tax so citizens are able to live in an approximate same level. Moreover, the amount of money that is paid as tax, is used to improve life situation. Researches indicate that in nations with approved tax, people have better quality of life. Constructing roads and providing appropriate transport system are nominated of facilities which are created by tax.
To sum up, paying tax should be determined as a part of everybody's income and not to be ignored to live in a balanced environment and having efficient facilities of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no rules'?
Suggestion: there are no rules
...ing to how much working people gain. If there is no rules to deduct some part of salary, a great ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd having efficient facilities of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81338028169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68400182571 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9961308959 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330478896022 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11396020116 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063668156705 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208625450256 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238994490427 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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