some people believe that tourists do not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe they learn a lot. discuss both views and opine.
It is seen that people have different views about travelling, whether it help to boost knowledge or it is just for roaming different places. While having different mindset, I believe going on vacations helps to ad-up in knowledge.
On the one hand, persons plan to go for vacation to relax not to learn. As, from busy schedule persons arrange trips to have some time for their own life, so that mind can relaxed. This help in better results and better concentration on work, which result in to complete work effectively and efficiently. Moreover, traveling means to schedule some time for family and make your bond strong. For instance, modern life is too busy that people have no time for family, so making a trip helps you to understand each other and have happy family.
On the other hand, visiting new places is medium to grasp more information. I believe, people save money year around to make trips and explore. As during visiting masses contact local people and extract more information about culture and languages and thus, they can compare better that place with others. Furthermore, one can not learn everything from books. Travelling helps you to get real life education and it is proved that visual effects have long-term effect on our mind other than hiring and reading. Moreover, it is also helpful in team work as it is taught to get goals completed by coordinating with team .
In conclusion, though some people have mindset that trips are for relaxation, but I believe a person can boost personal experience and knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92720306513 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54655390189 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6749483174 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143485793766 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508647188501 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330362589526 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915397384065 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139841551243 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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