Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve the problem while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is irrefutable that technology provides a number of benefits for us. However, the bitter truth is that technology has harmful to the climate. One segment of society deems that people should change their lifestyle and it has a great deal for our environment. But others believe in the opposite direction. Therefore I would deliver into both views before forming an opinion.
To commence with the first school of thoughts the modern technology impact on the environment can only reduce by an individual. That’s because a human does a lot of things to save the climate. First of all, if a man takes some individual steps such as using electricity when he or she needs. Moreover, the predominant is used public transportation rather than private. To instance, the four members of the same society are going to the office daily. If they share their vehicle so obviously they take benefits in two ways. First, they can save their money and also reduce air pollution. So Adopt some simple lifestyle are a great deal to save the environment.
On the flip side, some people contradict that technology has an ocean of knowledge about anything. In fact, we can easily tackle the environmental problem with the help of technology. To add to it, numerous scientific researches revealed it time and again that technology invention the number of equipment to save the environment. For example, by the help of Machines, we can make our house and Society neat and clean. That’s why we can reduce diseases like malaria, infection and so on. This type of diseases can only reduce when who use those machines which help throw the rubbish in outside the area.
After a complete analysis, it is clear that modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Therefore it is our joint responsibility to tackle this problem and this can only be lessened by taking the individual step and uses the technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94720496894 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79574870014 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6737235561 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8571428571 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245835078142 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069394669378 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753198967298 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158669940375 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698810881843 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.