Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of job.
Some say that occupations such as paramilitary, constables, reserve force should consist of an equal number of female and male, while others would argue that these jobs are not appropriate for women. In my opinion, women are equally strong and matured as men to be in such occupations.
On the one hand, those who believe that women are not compatible for armed forces and such occupations think that they are not physically strong as men because this job involves a lot of physical and tiring duties. Moreover, in this profession, one needs to be prepared for any contingency and actions that may involve encountering with criminals or terrorist as such. Therefore, with a narrower approach, few believe women are not at par with men in such professions.
On the other hand, few believe that women and men deserve equal opportunity across all the sectors as we are egalitarian society and women deserves the place in paramilitary and such related positions. Nowadays, women are participating in all kind of physical activities and meeting the standards criteria to be in such occupation. Furthermore, such a position requires high-level tactics and conscious mind that is comparatively more present in females than males. Taking World war II as an example, there were 35% of women who got into a warzone on behalf of their country. This shows how a woman can fit into such tough and hard posts.
In conclusion, nowadays women are getting stronger and meeting the standard criteria required to be eligible for such positions. Therefore, in my opinion, women should also be welcomed to pursue a career as police, army or investigative officer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
... few believe that women and men deserve equal opportunity across all the sectors as w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09558823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8746896929 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8827006858 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354807940517 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127470735956 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847923221294 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224433813266 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871777282415 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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