Some people like to buy new phones, new desktop or other latest devices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology changes so fast and it also brings newness to our life. If we stuck with our old fashioned techniques, we will never know how the world is developing. However, a certain group of people always look for new technology such as smartphones, tablets, laptops and other gadgets and do not bother to spend money for this. I strongly agree that, peoples’ life will be easier with these devices.
First and foremost, these types of instruments introduce people to the updated technology available in the world. In other words, every latest phones comes with innovative features which allow us to know how the time has changed and revolution took place in work place. For an example, laptops replace the desktop at every office in order to carry it conveniently and work from anywhere. This was possible when laptop was invented and the workers get used to with the features and benefits of the laptops.
At the same time, peoples’ daily life has become convenient remarkably by this assist of the modern technology. These communicating devices contains a number of application through which we can connect with people living on the other part of the world. For instance, skype and facebook are the most popular applications installed in phones or computers allow us to talk to or see people working overseas. Apart from this, we can use these gadgets for watching movies, playing games and studying articles which means all in one which makes our lives comfortable and enjoyable.
In conclusion, technology takes us towards new experience and provide convenience to our daily activities. Therefore, I believe, people should not hesitate to have new technical products in hand.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16606498195 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75257915307 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4523449046 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154056938093 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551036797507 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444669252314 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100403187956 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481122062834 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.