Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, people are more career oriented. Everyone prefer life with better career opportunities along with handsome salaries. In my opinion, anything chosen with liking will always prove out to be better in life. We can only upscale ourselves if we enjoy the work we're doing.
Today, inflation has become a serious problem in everyone’s life. Due to high expenses, wage earning is necessary. A person living below poverty line is facing multiple problems like unable to buy good food or unable to feed their children etc. Due to monetary issues, people would not be able to study and making suicidal commits. But, a person is facing such issues because s/he nowhere have an interest in their work or doesn't want to do work.
If a person enjoy doing work, then only s/he can earn immensely and live with a better life style. For instance, considering a great business leader N.R. Narayana Murthy, chief emeritus of Infosys Ltd, always believed on one concept "simple living high thinking". When he started his career, he had only Rs. 10,000 which he borrowed from his wife. He loved the work he was doing and done with complete dedication Today, everybody knows his as the person who firstly done the evolution of Information technology in India. His learning, perseverance and dedication towards his interest took him towards the heights of glory. Today, this person is the member of committee which discusses the economy of India. These qualities have automatically provided him a better social status and ample amount of money
In compendium, social status and salary are important but a person working with commitment will consequently get benefit out of it. The only ways to do great work is to love what you do because it is the only perspective which can truly satisfy you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281437125749 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.167664670659 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0898203592814 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0389221556886 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.062874251497 0.0437548338989 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0928143712575 0.122226691241 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0508982035928 0.0403226058552 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51819159098 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269461077844 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00299401197605 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.059880239521 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179640718563 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179640718563 0.011925033212 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1788.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393333333333 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236666666667 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163333333333 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.137316102897 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51819159098 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 72.4278046493 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7894736842 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7245716467 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 39.4561403509 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.57777777778 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289056006392 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0825680618907 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0705723943257 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412240535013 0.534860350844 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151788228713 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841635765034 0.134430193775 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591494274256 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.139990684688 0.324371583561 43% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0494658661572 0.0638462369009 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188924990892 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590049895827 0.058150111329 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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