Some people claim that competitive sports could bring different ages and culture together, such as football. Others believe competitive sports cause some problems for groups and nationalities. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have different views on competitive sports. Some assert these sports work as a glue to unite people, while others believe they bring troubles to people from different regions. This essay will discuss both schools of thought and explain why I am in favour of the former.
People who think competitive sports are detrimental to people’s relationships believe that such sports can elicit resentments among different fans groups. This is because most fans of such sports have a strong sense of honour. Meaning they believe that the team they support is the best team, and therefore, holding a negative attitude towards supporters of other teams. For example, it is common to see in the World Cup that people have disagreement, fights, and even physical violence with fans from a different country. Thus, it is fair to say that some competitive sports split people from different nations.
However, I would agree with people who argue such sports unite people from different backgrounds. The reason behind this is sports lovers can share the same passion and feel a sense of belonging from being a fan of the game. The NBA game, for instance, is a blast for millions of basketball lovers regardless of their age and background. Many people have even made friends with others via sharing information on online NBA platform. Without these competitive games, people will have fewer chances to have a community to interact and form a relationship with others from different age group or cultural background.
In conclusion, it is possible for people from different countries to encounter conflicts or problems when watching competitive sports, as most sports lovers are only loyal to one team. But I still believe that all walks of life can find a sense of community via watching such games, as it provides them with a chance of sharing the same interest which can bring their relationships closer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1050955414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68059994205 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525477707006 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9803055674 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343830165393 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12753276199 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804278483628 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22697660076 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538715338065 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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