Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Of late, management of household waste materials become a topic for heated discussions. Some are of the opinion that implementation of stringent law is the only measure to promote the rate of domestic garbage recycling. In this disquisition I completely agree with the view with supporting details and proper illustration.
To embark on, making policies for the rubbish disposal by the authority would definitely create an awareness among the populace. For example, the government of India has introduced a cleanliness program named as 'Swach Bharat' in which more emphasis is placed on proper disposal of waste and cleanliness of the environment that includes monetary penalties for the violation of law. As an outcome, nowadays people in India are much aware about the garbage disposal than before. Hence it goes without saying that, legal enforcement of waste management is effective to great extent.
Moreover, there is a common tendency among the citizens to abide by the law. The fear of punishment may force them follow the rules. To be clear, in developed countries that have strict strategies for rubbish removal, citizenry follow the rules without any hesitation. In contrast, in many developing nations, people are still careless about the segregation and management of garbages due to lack of governmental policies. There for it can be irrefutably stated that legal enforcement of garbage recycling is quite effective.
In conclusion,governmental efforts of legalizing waste collection and management is the best way to motivate the people to recycle the throw away things. It is hoped that the state would take initiative to induce laws for the wisely management of rubbish.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34962406015 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10744020611 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3206264704 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233657982983 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687730587149 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524793967953 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131825636369 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449819491947 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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