In this contemporary era, financial development is regarded as one of the biggest concern for the authorities around the world. Meanwhile, another group of people believe that there are other equally demanding areas of growth for a nation. This disquisition analysis both the views to arrive at a tenable conclusion.
On the one hand, economic development enable countries to impart high level amenities to the populace which increases the quality of their lives. For example, in developed nations, people are enjoying much satisfied life because their government is able to provide superior amenities and care to the citizens. Similarly, happiness is depending on the fulfilment of basic needs. When the needs of the people are met in a satisfied way, it increases the satisfaction levels of the citizenry.
On the other hand, a country has to concentrate on other areas of growth too. Mere monetary gain would not ensure the development of modern society. A country has to focus more on education, health care and security for the well functioning of the society. For instance, some financially developed countries have to depend on other nations for technology, education and healthcare which indicate that there are many other services that require equal attention to financial growth.
In conclusion, focusing on financial growth along with the development of other areas is equally important because it would be helpful to fulfill the requirements of the modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e to the citizens. Similarly, happiness is depending on the fulfilment of basic needs. When ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32478632479 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88840839579 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9864046531 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139324622581 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465804567697 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472772603992 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853597740256 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334071208096 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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