Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics:

Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.

The factors which are considered by customers before making any purchase are always a topic of research, some people gives importance to price of the item or services while others consider a lot of other aspects, such as quality. In my opinion, it is totally depended on the type of product in the transaction; if it is FMCG product then price is viable option but not in case of medical.

To begin with, the evaluation of value of some products can only be done with its price. It is important to strike a balance between price and quality because if the hard-earned money of buyers is not spent wisely, people may end up in the vicious circle of debt, which my force them to the world of crime. Besides, everybody wants great value for their investment and that can only be achieved by checking the price and comparing with their own purchasing power. For example, similar products are available in the market with a huge difference in price, so chances of fraud are increased exponentially. Thus, checking the cost of product prevents them from being victim of such scams.

However, people do not always considered the cost in all the areas, especially in medical facilities. Nobody wants to compromise with their health care facility, just because of its cheapness. Moreover, negligence toward health can have serious implications on life, people are aware about the fact so they never choose price over quality. For example, people invest half of their saving to purchase the best health insurance possible for them. At the same time, people who prefer durability are willing to pay more to get the best product available, which saves them from the cost of repairing. So, for them, price becomes irrelevant when they purchase something from the market.

In conclusion, price does play role a huge role but only in certain products. When it comes to medical people are keener on quality than cost because of its serious implication on life.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89156626506 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53913340183 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3808389556 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213298249506 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717612938703 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515633849148 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13491576985 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555061932746 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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