Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that money comes first whilst buying a product or taking a service, whether it a mobile phone or a hospital treatment. In my opinion, nevertheless, the price is a priority when it comes to purchasing end products with a planned financial expending, there should be other major factors deciding the choice for cases like treatment for a life threatening medical condition.
On the one hand, it is globally true that price becomes the prime consideration influencing the buying of many products like a cellular phone or other electronic devices. The world has become so competitive that the leading brands keep their market share by providing a range of technologies at different respective price tags to fit the pocket of corresponding factions of the population. In turn, this helps even a layman to choose his favorite product just looking not anymore at the technical specifications but price. Hence the cost of products finally decides the type and quality of and one can easily make a pick from the numerous availabilities looking just at the price tags.
On the other hand, the cost becomes trivial while we have to decide on a more serious multifaceted issue like choosing a hospital service for a quick to at medical case. Here the priorities are rather more stressed upon factors like the condition of the patient, proximity of service and skill and experience of the hospital team. It is clearly evident that the consideration and control over the money matters less when we need to handle situations that go beyond just price.
In conclusion, we would set price, the deciding factor to buy products and thing, where can plan and spend, however, in situations like a life saving medical surgery, the control and influence of financial budgeting are trivial. So, it is our conscience that helps us make a choice taking into account the severity of the buy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99047619048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79471480459 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1821922917 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173402349856 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670809922569 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361573943825 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108652724768 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288028808422 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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