Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more problems or more benefits?
Stardom gives celebrities like movies actors or athletes glory in addition to problems. However, the demerits of being a star are so minuscule compared with the privileges and public respect a celebrity frequently enjoys.
Firstly, celebrities are getting wealthy mainly through their stardom. High-value adverts contracts and mammoth remunerations they are granted with, for instance, are taking consideration of how famous they are in the public. In addition to this, they are respected and adored by people in all corners of life, irrespective of which field they became famous for. The way actor Rajnikant urged public and averted a turmoil in two states of India during the Kaveri River water dispute is a good example of how much influence these celebrities can impose in the society.
Conversely, the benefits of being a star come at the price of privacy of life. The life of a celebrity is always in the spotlight on and off the screen. Overwhelming fans and media make them prone to controversies and bitter criticisms over their lifestyles, family life and attitudes. The burden of being diplomatic and overcautious stands on public and personal matters make the life of them more materialistic.
To conclude, in my opinion, even though stardom comes at an expense for celebrities, the advantages they enjoy in our society are enormous that a common man can never dream of. I also believe, the status of being the celebrity is more than a privilege and it makes the person act socially responsible and give back to the community that made him a hero.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0694980695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83928468882 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5516026595 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189052928752 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725979515971 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575666467506 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115079549992 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345910194299 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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