Some people say that no one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual, company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that people should not work continuously in a single company for a lifetime whereas, some consider having to work at the same place would rather mutually benefit emploee-employer and eventually the society as well. In my opinion people ought to work in different places and situations to gather all-round knowledge and experiences, thus helping to develop a successful career.
On the one hand, as many put forward, being employed in different companies and vivid work-environments help individuals make themselves both professional and adaptive and obviously, I agree completely. To have worked in a range of roles and familiarized in contrasting work cultures, make people competent and successful in any work demands in any part of the world. To illustrate, a person who has an additional experience in the planning department finds it easy to handle a project as a project manager, compared with his counterparts. Furthermore, switching jobs would give an opportunity to negotiate better remuneration and fringe benefits, that an employee can never expect normally, evenif he stays.
On the other hand, there is always a belief that it is better for the employee, firm and society, to stay always together. The decision making and execution of projects are always easier with a permanent set of teammates. It is also argued that being at the same job for years makes one the master of it. In addition, the environ created by familiar fellows becomes more cozy and friendly rather than a team of strangers.
In conclusion, despite the fact that working permanently in a company has some managerial and administrative benefits, I strongly believe that it is rather indispensable for a professional to switch over jobs and responsibilities for a successful career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun put seems to be countable; consider using: 'many puts'.
Suggestion: many puts
...cessful career. On the one hand, as many put forward, being employed in different co...
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Line 6, column 319, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...akes one the master of it. In addition, the environ created by familiar fellows becomes mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25874125874 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21459335616 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9872776224 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182711905296 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647869642332 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601213983976 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113295064324 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285269706489 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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