Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (like cell phone) or service. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that the price of a product or service is essential to consider before deciding to purchase something. While I agree that the people need to consider carefully before spending large amounts of money in order to avoid debt, the necessary of the purchase must play a role in the decision to buy.
It is essential that people take some time to reflect on how much money they should spend on an item or services, and whether or not they can actually afford it with in their available budget. Many a time it happen that a person spend more amount in a laxuries item and when he need money actually that time he does not have it. so to avoide such type of situation a person always have to consider and think the price factor.
On the other hand, there are circumstances where the price is not the factor in front of the services require. Eg. When a person is hospitalised, the family member does not see the price becuase that time the life of a person is important than money. There are many more incident where a person can't control on price but they have to spend money to avail the benefit or purchasing the things for them self.
In conclusion, people shoudl atmost care while spending their hard earn money on goods or services, except in case of emergency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...hould spend on an item or services, and whether or not they can actually afford it with in the...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
... their available budget. Many a time it happen that a person spend more amount in a la...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'incidents'?
Suggestion: incidents
...portant than money. There are many more incident where a person cant control on price bu...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e are many more incident where a person cant control on price but they have to spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49576271186 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33459964476 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.7093101257 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16948589865 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771698974533 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518659579561 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100602628568 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579418431589 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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