You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to former teacher
Respected teacher,
I am happy to inform you that i have been selected for the post of assistant manager in one of the leading multi national company. The profile of the upcoming job will be co-ordination between my collegue on finalisation of accounts and support our finance team in completing the audit in time. The roles are very much challenging and it will keep me updates on the various changes happened in different statute. In this organisation i have to directly report to a finance director or Managing director which will increase my confidence level and it will also help me to groom my self personally.During my interview they have ask me so many question, some were easy and some were difficult to reply but i had never give up during my interview and was more confident on my self and becuase of my answer to thier questiona and looking in to my confidence level they have selected me for this challenging role.
In the intial appointment formalities, HR has told me to bring one reference letter in which they need my characher cum good standing certificate. As you are my mentor and ideal, i want you to give me a reference letter, so that i can submit the same in to my new organisation.
Thanking you,
Warm Regards,
Praful Shah
Comments
This was my mock test and I
This was my mock test and I am happy to see my result
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: During
...lso help me to groom my self personally.During my interview they have ask me so many q...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'asked'.
Suggestion: asked
...ersonally.During my interview they have ask me so many question, some were easy and...
^^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...During my interview they have ask me so many question, some were easy and some were difficult...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sy and some were difficult to reply but i had never give up during my interview a...
^
Line 3, column 716, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...were difficult to reply but i had never give up during my interview and was more con...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ficate. As you are my mentor and ideal, i want you to give me a reference letter,...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to give me a reference letter, so that i can submit the same in to my new organi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72398190045 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88333659881 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.180505899 44.8134815571 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.142857143 76.5299724578 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 16.8248392259 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116391044391 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673474802098 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514255349419 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102114675583 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063604277793 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.