You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
Explain what the problem is
Explain why it is disturbing you so much
Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it
Date: May 05, 2019
To,
Mr. ABC
Mumbai - 50
Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter to make the complaint about my new neighbour who has recently shifted to above this floor. our new neighbours who are between the age of 25-30 keep so much loud music which is ultimately disturbing my daily routine life and work too.
when I came here first time with my wife to check and verify the premises, we like the this place at a first sight only due to various reason. Out of the various reason for selecting this apartment one of the strong reason was apartment and surroundings are very peaceful which provide me energy and increase my thinking process towards generating new ideas for my office purpose as I am working in an advertisement agency. when we shifted to this apartment the initial few month was very smooth and peaceful. we also like to inform you that from few days when our new neighbour have came, I am unable to concentrate on my creativity and work properly because the peoples who reside in that apartment are between the age of 25-30 and keep loud music while playing. it is affecting my work and life badly.
I therefore request you to either to give warning our new neighbour to stop this loud music nuisance and
stay peaceful or refund back our money so that we can search other alternative as it affect my career and personal life badly.
Looking forward for your strict action against this loud music.
Your Sincerely,
Praful Shah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Date: May 05, 2019 To, Mr. ABC Mumbai - 50 Respected Sir, I am wr...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...s recently shifted to above this floor. our new neighbours who are between the age ...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p so much loud music which is ultimately disturbing my daily routine life and wor...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... my daily routine life and work too. when I came here first time with my wife to ...
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Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
... check and verify the premises, we like the this place at a first sight only due to vari...
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Line 11, column 425, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... am working in an advertisement agency. when we shifted to this apartment the initia...
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Line 11, column 471, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...e shifted to this apartment the initial few month was very smooth and peaceful. we also l...
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Line 11, column 511, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...few month was very smooth and peaceful. we also like to inform you that from few d...
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Line 11, column 585, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...om few days when our new neighbour have came, I am unable to concentrate on my creat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...5-30 and keep loud music while playing. it is affecting my work and life badly. ...
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Line 13, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our to stop this loud music nuisance and stay peaceful or refund back our money s...
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Line 14, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t we can search other alternative as it affect my career and personal life badly. L...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72586872587 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39712599121 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4358721828 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196405301868 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074232261265 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449946847706 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109392124832 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649847974609 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.