Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that price should be the biggest consideration when people decide to purchase any products or services. I totally disagree with this idea because people will buy products that are essential for their daily lives and the quality of services or items is always more important than prices.
Individuals will choose to pay for a product that is necessary for daily use no matter how expensive that product is. In order words, when people are completely in need of something, they will accept to pay for that in-demand product at any cost. For example, a survey conducted by the University of Finance in Ho Chi Minh City shows that 70 percent of the city residents are willing to pay a price of 10 million Vietnam dongs, which is very high for a Vietnamese, to own a smartphone because it is an indispensable device for work and study.
Quality is another important aspect that takes precedence over the costs of products and services. This is because cheap products are usually made from low-quality materials and also go through a sloppy producing process in order to reduce the final cost. Therefore, if people choose to take low prices into consideration when buying, they will likely encounter very bad products. For instance, Asanzo, an electronics company, distributes very cheap refrigerators in Vietnam and, in 2016, a large number of consumers reported that the components of these products were outdated, made in China and disapproved by the US government.
In conclusion, the price tags of any items or service should never be the top priority when buying as the demand and the quality of a product is the more important things to take into people’s consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... refrigerators in Vietnam and, in 2016, a large number of consumers reported that the components ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97902097902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81516957134 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.521053307 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183973131847 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856592243562 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608618083146 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141623891475 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673833784665 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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