Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
Generally, people have a laundry list of basic requirements which needs to be satisfied before making a choice on a product. There are a few people who are of the opinion that the cost of the commodity plays a vital role in helping them arrive at a decision of whether to buy or not to buy, especially in case of electronic gadgets like mobile phones or seeking health-care facilities. This essay will argue how price might be one of the factors but not the most influencing factor while taking a decision.
Firstly, it is important to understand that the decision of buying a product arises out of a need. Therefore, the buyer will always look for the features that satisfies his needs from a given product. Then, he will equate the value to the cost before taking the final decision. For instance, while buying a mobile phone, people look for the ratings given by other buyers, its memory, RAM, battery life among other things before raising questions on price. Most of the time, they would not hesitate to stretch their budget if all other requirements are met. Here, overall satisfaction matters, which is possible only when all factors are considered.
In addition to the above, the same stands true when it comes to procuring services. Infact, more so, if it is related to something as sensitive as health-care. People approach hospitals with the sole aim of getting the best of treatments and therefore, do their ground work by finding out about the doctors before deciding their preferred treatment center. It would be fool-hardy on their part to simply look at the price-chart and then decide whether to get the treatment done or not. For example, if the ailment is serious and the doctors are the best in a particular hospital, people normally prefer to go ahead with the treatment irrespective of cost. What matters to them is the life of their loved ones and not the expense.
To sum up, the essay argued that even though the price matters to some extent, on a larger scale, it is the performance and features in case of mobiles and success of treatments in case of hospitals, which drives people towards decision making.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: groundwork
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79189189189 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58665592938 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548648648649 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9495672439 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176928494495 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503731843898 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034052676875 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101855037747 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107867776357 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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