Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cellphone) or service (eg: medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Certain individuals are giving foremost importance to the cost prior to making any sort of purchases. I totally agree with this trend as everything is getting more and more expensive these days, it is very crucial to make wise buys. In this essay, I will firstly cover the reason for this pattern and secondly how this change is helping families spend wisely.
People purchase is on the higher side compared to the past years. With technology advancing, we come across new and improved products and services in the market year after year; this means people are more attracted to buy latest innovations forcing them to spend often on the same item. This, in turn, compels the buyer to look for economical buys. One such item like that is the mobile phones. For example, companies like Apple, Samsung, BlackBerry are releasing the updated version of their phones and tablets every year.
With this rising trend in recent days, a person who decides to get a commodity first spending more time on the internet studying the features of the product or the service; he then opts to check for alternate options with the cheaper price. For example, many Chinese mobile companies are now copying the same tools of a Samsung or Apple phones. Alternatively, he can also decide to wait for the item to be discounted or on sale. Example, people have become smarter by keeping a tab on the sale months and plan their purchases accordingly.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people should give prime focus to their expenditure, yet ensure they are keeping up with the trends of the new generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...this means people are more attracted to buy latest innovations forcing them to spend often...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'spend'.
Suggestion: often spend
... buy latest innovations forcing them to spend often on the same item. This, in turn, compel...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83941605839 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47890562425 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8996353366 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741202495504 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025366041003 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246294572028 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424587989185 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021426061528 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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