Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Even after failing in school, some people still flourish well in life because they prefer practical knowledge and hands-on activities rather than theoretical knowledge. In my opinion, the most necessary thing to be successful in life is hard work and determination.
To begin with, most of the famous entrepreneurs such as Bill Gates and Steve Jobs never completed their high school education. The reason behind that was they felt they could achieve so much more by pursuing what they knew they could do instead of gaining all the theoretical knowledge at the school. They started working on their chosen career path earlier than fair amount of people and kept working hard on it and ended up being successful. Secondly, some people cannot handle the pressure of the peers and the burden of the exams, yet they are good at certain tasks. For example, Albert Einstein lacked in general social skills but excelled in mathematics and physics.
Furthermore, the most crucial thing in being successful is to set a career goal and keep on working with full determination to reach that goal. Keeping yourself motivated even after failing is also the key to success. Most of the famous personalities in the world have worked hard consistently for a number of years to reach where they are today. For example, Indian actor/singer Diljit Dosanj, failed in school but he was good at singing, so he kept on learning and practicing for years and he got his first singing contract in 2005 and now he is a well known singer in all of India.
To conclude, by not giving up and by working hard towards a set goal, people can still be successful in life, even though they failed in school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...l. They started working on their chosen career path earlier than fair amount of people...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in general, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58125803365 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5677588185 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256419251388 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987503942527 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782506937078 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189567216687 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791342032359 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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