The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare for work in the future.
It is commonly believed that ever-changing work environment is forcing people to keep looking for better opportunities. The main causes of that would be the globalization, impact of technology and introduction of new ways of earning a living.
To begin with, computers play a huge role in every industry as they make the work more efficient, less time-consuming and remove the possibility of human error, for instance, in calculations, resulting in changing the whole dynamic of work environment. Secondly, the introduction of new occupations such as social media marketing, online businesses and earning a living by uploading videos on Youtube never existed earlier. As these occupations are fairly new and have comparatively less competition, people are applying for these positions. Moreover, with increasing population, more and more people are applying for the same traditional jobs, which make people feel less secure in the job they are doing.
In my opinion, developing expertise in a certain field of work always turns out to be beneficial in the long run. As most companies value knowledge and experience as the criteria of selection of the employees, people with skills will always have a place in the industry. Also, it is important to stay up to date with the modern technology to have a secure future, while being genuinely interested in the chosen line of work is equally essential.
In conclude, to survive in the future of dynamic work environment, choosing the occupation with thorough thinking and acquiring skills, knowledge and experience is very important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33466135458 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11689783952 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2745577257 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270118522819 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100921412162 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856290651025 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145051195944 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829810357692 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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