Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been observed that trend of buying international brand has been drastically increased in the past decade. A group of people are of the view that consumers prefer buying domestic items; whereas other group asserts that people nowadays tend to buy international items. I completely agree that international product purchasing pattern is more evident than local. I shall discuss my stance in more detail with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the obvious reason of buying international products is the quality of product and value for money. International brands such as Adidas, Nike & Mango keeps consumer comfort and requirements as their top priority while making an article. As compared to local item, an international product would cost little more but considering quality it would worth spending the money. For instance, I bought Nike shoes online in 100$, its quality was extraordinary and comfort was exactly how I wished; whereas even if I spend 100$ on a domestic product It would not sustain even 3 months.
To elucidate it further, one more obvious reason of international brand purchasing is the maintenance of social status. People nowadays are status conscious and feels pride in wearing an international items rather than local. The mindset of wearing top notch products does not let people purchase domestic items. For example, in a party if am wearing a local brand which is obviously not as famous as an international one I would be considered probably poor or outdated.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that there are certain prominent reasons as some mentioned above, due to which people tend to purchase international brands and this trend is increasing. Government should pay attention to encourage people buy domestic items in order to boost global recognition. Also manufacturers should pay attention to the quality of their products to boost sales.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29126213592 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98051424095 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0492764962 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247050290045 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834847055369 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583914026233 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147794358161 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587114539645 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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